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I am preparing to shoot a video of a summary of chapters 8 and 9 using The Sims 3. So I need a script. Anyone interested in helping out?

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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #1 » Published on:February 17, 2014, 09:57:35 AM

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Let me expand on this. I would like to co-write the script on the forum, see what we like to see in the video and if we can accomplish that.

Idealy it would not run longer that 2 minutes. I think we can cut enough of the story to achieve that. All the story will be set in the old west, so we'd need 2 main locations for Harling Pass and Kanesville. Each location will have a couple of different sets, for instance the ship and the bar in Harling Pass and the dormitory, militia headquarters and the vaudeville theatre.

What we need is to establish what parts of the story are really important for the rest of the story and for new (or old) members, as a means to 'read up' on what happened so far.

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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #2 » Published on:February 17, 2014, 05:12:25 PM

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Outline:

- Steamhawke crew lands in Harling Pass, meets John Colton and gets in bar brawl.
- Katherine Solias offers extra map to Quazlatah (I am nott 100% sure we need this in the summary though)
- Ashrieda meets a stranger who knows her
- Melisande buys passage to Kanesville
- Melisande and Carol fight, the doctor patches them up (again, not sure if this is needed in the summary)
- The Perrys watch an 'execution' of a tainted man
- Daenelia arranges for the ship to be stowed in a hangar
- Colton wants to kill Daenelia
- Dottie and Akito get  drunk
- Valentine is after the treasure as well
- The crew set out in wagons and on horseback to go to Kanesville

It's important to filter out what new members or readers absolutely need to know to be able to follow chapter 9 and beyond.
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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #3 » Published on:February 17, 2014, 05:26:40 PM

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Outline ch 9 so far

- Arrival in Kanesville and taking over the abandonned factory and dormitory
- Jefferson being replaced by Maraea as first mate
- Leftheris, Melisande and Chago discover the entertainment hall/vaudeville theatre
- Faizel builds a still
- Price leads a new council and gets killed for it by Daenelia
- Faizel brings a cabin girl on board (Every)
- Shanen joins as a guide and as a pair of strong hands
- A girl gets killed
- Chago gets arrested for it and other murders
- Dr Yorvlad makes a return, and is helping the Church of the Machine turn factory workers into machine men
- Erm turns out to be a runaway boy, with a murder on his conscience
- Melisande goes undecover in the Vaudeville theatre
- Nate dreams of Chago
- Azzo is in Kanesville
- Shanen, Colton and Ashreida check out Yorvlad's lab
- Chago escapes
- Food crisis in Kanesville deepens
- Bridget talks to the militia
- Erm is almost dragged back into the clutches of the church
- Colton and Brem lose the key to the ship
- Daenelia replaces Maraea with Faizel as First Mate

Obviously chapter 9 isnt done yet, so if a crucial turn of events takes place, we'll add that.
« Last Edit: February 17, 2014, 05:42:06 PM by Daenelia »
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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #4 » Published on:February 17, 2014, 09:38:27 PM

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Created 8 sims to start with.

Linked out for size group 1

Linked out for size 'Nelia and Colton

Did not want to overload for people who browse the forum on their phone.
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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #5 » Published on:February 18, 2014, 01:44:51 PM

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ch 8:

Interior location: saloon, daytime
- Colton is standing at the bar, the crew walks in, Colton gooses Daenelia, Daenelia hugs him. Two bounty hunters stand up and approach Colton, fight ensues with all crew and all visitors.

Diverse locations, summing up:
- close up Ashrieda, close up Katherine, close up Melisande, close up Colton, close up Erm

Exterior location, street:
- The Perrys are walking through town, a tainted runs past, a group of about 5-6 people chase him. The Perrys hug, Bridget cries, Remy looks grim.

Interior location, saloon:
- Katherine offers map to Daenelia, Mysterious Valentine watches from the shadows.

Exterior location, edge of town:
- crew get ready to leave, walking into the sunset (or on horseback)

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Re: Steamhawke summary video chapter 8 and 9: script

« Reply #6 » Published on:August 03, 2014, 09:31:59 AM

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Stuff got in the way. PLus updates on the game. I can now actually make wild west themed sets...

Anyway, as soon as I have time I will start shooting this, with abbreviated stories, as we dont want to make it too long. I will always focus more on characters still in play at the moment.
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